How long have you been playing? If you don't mind my asking (among other things I've a very musical and artsy family), and I'll be sure and ask you in the future about that! (need to get more of it done, so much to do, no time!)
Once I figure out a few things I will be contacting you, "Emily's song" simply does not work with a guitar as a main instrument. Thus it must be filled with ambient noises, which is where you come in!
Ehh, feelin kinda nervous now, don't wanna disappoint ya or anything, you'll have to describe in vivid detail later so that i can craft something half decent for you.