0VincentRayne0

0VincentRayne0

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  • Dab_Of_Oppo
    Might I ask how goes the Bereavement? And more for us to read? :) Not meaning to pester, just genuinely looking forward too it!
    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    It's going pretty good but was slowed a little bit this weekend due to pre-scheduled plans. will get back on it tomorrow. the chapter is 1/3 done I believe so if i have a good run with typing on my laptop without interruptions from my brothers then I should be good.
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Good luck!
    Kevin
    Hey dude..! How you been?
    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    been doing good. been a little busy lately but it's all good still. Happy New year, btw. XD
    Kevin
    Kevin
    Alright.. Happy New Year to u 2 X)
    Isaiah
    I love your signature!!!
    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    thanks. took me a while to get it right. the words kept wanting to go below where you could see them.
    Isaiah
    Isaiah
    You must have went through hell trying to make the signature.LOL Happy New Year!!
    0VincentRayne0
    i'm so tired right now. got to see mission impossible 4. easily the best of them all.
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    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Simon Pegg is in it isn't he? Yeah, then I must see this movie.
    Isaiah
    Isaiah
    Seems to me that you liked the movie. I WANNA SEE IT!!!!
    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    yeah. i was skeptical at first but then i got into it really fast. and yes Simon Pegg is my favorite British actor and he keeps his funny moments like his own movies. i greatly recommend this movie.
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    When can we expect more of your work? Not that I'm asking you to rush (lol, I still have a few more chapters to get caught up!). You're very good!
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    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Not a problem, did you get the 'songs' I sent? Still could use some help with music.

    By the way, I'm having the avatar made into a vinyl decal (my friend has a machine), probably will sell some on etsy.com if you want.
    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    i'll definitely look in on it. i have your lyrics to emily's song on another tab. i'll look at it tomorrow though cause me and my brother are about to knock out. i'm practically seeing double writing this. >_< talk to you tomorrow.
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Likewise, but without the brother! You have a good night, Ser!
    NDK
    Hey werent you at the Pasadena tournament a while back?
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    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    back then i was using Amy. but i also went through Talim with Signia and Setsuka in some other rounds. there were 3 colored people there. there was the maxi user guy, the nightmare and sigfried user and there was me. i had the lightest skin of us all. I think i remember you. do you wear glasses?
    NDK
    NDK
    Ah I think I remember, yeah that's me
    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    okay. i remember you now. you were a devastation too right?
    0VincentRayne0
    going to SoCal Regional Tournament this Sunday. can't wait!
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    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    i really wanted to go but unfortunately circumstances came up and i couldn't make it. i was so close too. a sudden appointment came up and i had to take it. hopefully something will make up for it.
    KiraxSummers
    KiraxSummers
    Oh man, too bad :( But I'm sure another opportunity shall present itself! Just think of it as a chance to kick ass some other time ;)
    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    XD thanks. i will. next time no southern california event shall escape my grasp. hopefully.
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    That writers website your on, is it any good?
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    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    don't worry about fear of anything. it's not a pure commercial website like facebook. also the fact that it is .org means that it is a self owned website so no commercials and no hassle. wow i feel like one of those tv advertisement announcers.
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    IF YOU ORDER NOW WE'LL ALSO THROW IN A SET OF STEAK KNIVES!
    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    BUT WAIT! THAT'S NOT ALL!
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    I just want to know, does Kayla end up "fixed?"

    Lol, and your Kayla and my Emily would probably be best friends
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    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    she seemed like between 18 and 20. i know that she's young but she also has a mature and controlling vibe. and if there's gonna be some light heated stuff then cassandra and petter is definitely where to put it.
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Petter/Cass is basically a road-trip story. :P
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    It would be good juxtaposition against Emily and Matthew as well. :)
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Good writing, if a bit long-winded in places. Very interested to see where your story goes. Good work!
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    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    The thing is, do we fear or sympathize with Kayla? So far it's been mostly fear. Are you intending to go for both? It can be done, and it's easier then it looks.
    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    i do plan on going for both but instead of both hitting you from either side i was originally planning on giving these feeling to the audience one after the other. well you'll see as the story progresses. i don't want to give anything away.
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Can't wait. Ha, and sorry you guys have to wait so long between mine, I'm incredibly OCD in the sense it has to be 'perfect' before I'm letting anyone read it. Though don't fall into the habit of "Lucas-ing" your work.
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    I have to say your band tracks have grown on me as well.
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    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    why thank you. actually those are solo projects. just me and my guitars and syths. the drums are programmed though.
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Band or Solo, the statement still stands.
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    I'll give your 2nd and 3rd chapters a good 'once-over' later today, some descriptions tear you away from the story, "Now we're going to go look at this house.." I'll let you know tomorrow (well, later today, catch a nap first.)

    The concept is interesting and keeps me reading, very good work!
    Dab_Of_Oppo
    Ha, sorry I'm such an ass when looking over your stuff.
    0VincentRayne0
    0VincentRayne0
    no it's good. i know that i need to work on some stuff and the critique helps me find out what it is. i appreciate your post for real.
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