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Leshain
Leshain
it's from my personal collection though, the guy i was working for somehow managed to delete 100 original scores and the 375 sound effects i made for him. but at least you can critic my personal work, don't hold back now, if something seems off to you feel free to tear into it, need to improve as im actually making decent money off of being a music producer now.
Tael
Tael
I liked the Main Antagonist Theme, ther is a nice vibe to it.

The Blue chick theme felt random, some things didn't fit together and it semmed like you just threw stuff together withour thinking. Nervertheless I like the general idea.
Tael
Tael
Alcecdrasuv's theme has the right feel to it although I think it lacks a little bit of originality

Pimp guy's theme is simple but has a good laid back attitude.
Tael
Tael
The Gothic girl's theme is very good. The bell sound has some very high harmonics which are unpleasant, but that make the theme even more mysterious and opressive. The vocals felt like they were creepy without them wanting to be, I liked it !

Hat guy's theme was nicely done although it didn't look like it was his theme but that's me.
Tael
Tael
Blond ponytail man's theme. I don't know if it was intetional or not but the two themes running at different tempos made some not too bad polyrhtyhms.

Ginger man's theme felt kind of badass, which seems to fit with his appearance. Not bad.
Tael
Tael
You theme felt like one for a badass character in an old chool game. I liked it

Guy with red armour's theme was nice. Again it felt badass. But the drops sounds were totally out of place and harmonically wrong. Didn't give a good feel.
Tael
Tael
That last girl's theme was ok, but felt a little bit underdevelopped.

Overall, I like your work, although it could use more work on the sounds and more developpement. Keep it up ! :)
Leshain
Leshain
Whoa, you took the time to individually note them, cool. thanks Tael. :)
Leshain
Leshain
I'll take all your helpful feedback and learn from it. so the pros and cons would be...

Pros:
Good Balance
Unique
Badass (lol)

Cons:
Underdevelopped
Odd tempos here and there
Quality Control?
Tael
Tael
Yes, although I would add "Randomness" both to Pros and Cons.
Leshain
Leshain
lol okay thanks. i made a few more new ones, and a handful for a friend, would you like to hear those as well?
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