My CaS characters

i got my created characters already for 5 three main one it goes like this the village of storm is a peaceful village surrounded by other villages, village of ice and fire. a young boy name mike a sword men age 20 style ( raphael) wants to be a strong fighter to protect this friends and love one and bring peace to the fighting world.


a girl name nel a swords men age 19 ( style zwei) a young fighter with her pet wolf that packs a punch they been together since she was 5 years old she wants to prove to her family that she can be on her own but her family thinks she is to young to fight in a real battle.

next a boy named albel age 23 swordsmen (style mitsurgi) very independed dont like working together as a team very cocky and rude goal is to kill the guy who killed this parents.

how they met started by a aduction where nel's village got attacked they set out to fight but they called storm and fire village to help the thives tryed to kiddnap nel and send her up the beam but mike and albel try to save her but got beamed to but not to a ship to another world a world far from home these young kids must learn to work together in oder to get home but on there journey home they meet other people along the way strange people,kids, robots, strange plants fight evil along the way while trying to get home will they evey get home i guess will find out soon.
 
Yes, but editing, grammar, capitalization and some spelling could help. Your sentences run on a lot. Sure, stories shouldn't be super edit happy at first glance. However, I humbly think an edit happy storyteller, makes it easier for some unknown reader to follow.


Anyways, Albel the non team player that's a cocky jerk. Nel the girl who wants to show her family she can fight. And finally Mike, the guy who wishes to be the best and wants to protect his loved ones. Now, is there any pics you're gonna post, nubbz?
 
Well, turns out my camera's picture quality is abysmal. As in "Oh god my eyes I can't see past the pixellation"-tier abysmal. So, clear pictures? Definitely out of the question. v_v
 
thats not good news to hear sow we can't see good clear pics of youre character(s)

Screens like this
Leandra32.jpg


following youre formula's he had to look something like this am i right mate??
Xander Alondite 1p and 2p Costume

XanderAlondite-1.jpg

XanderAlondite-2.jpg
 
Pocky-Yoshi said:
Yes, but editing, grammar, capitalization and some spelling could help. Your sentences run on a lot. Sure, stories shouldn't be super edit happy at first glance. However, I humbly think an edit happy storyteller, makes it easier for some unknown reader to follow.


Anyways, Albel the non team player that's a cocky jerk. Nel the girl who wants to show her family she can fight. And finally Mike, the guy who wishes to be the best and wants to protect his loved ones. Now, is there any pics you're gonna post, nubbz?
Click to expand...
thanks im new to this but yes when the game comes out i will
 
DarkSoul said:
thats not good news to hear sow we can't see good clear pics of youre character(s)

Screens like this
Leandra32.jpg


following youre formula's he had to look something like this am i right mate??
Xander Alondite 1p and 2p Costume

XanderAlondite-1.jpg

XanderAlondite-2.jpg
Click to expand...

That's really close, yeah. He has Dueler's Gloves instead of Iron Gauntlets, and Gram instead of Faust. Still, those are great. :D
 
Go ahead and take a look, they're on the front page. :P

Assuming you can make it past the pixellation of course.

And props to DarkSoul for the Xander picture, mine is crap-tier.
 
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