V.Rozaria's Created Souls! Some Original, Others Not So.

[V.Rozaria]

Just wanted to share my creations with the community, feedback would be appreciated.


Zatanna(DC Comics)

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Kunimitsu (Tekken 2)

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Raphael Alt(Street Fighter Vega's 3rd Alt)

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Pan(Greek Mythology)

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Yojimbo (Original)

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Shi-kiba (Original)

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Catboy =3

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[V.Rozaria]

Looks like I DID need an additional space.

Gione Romero (Original)(Joke)

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Tanaka (Original)​

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[brucege]

Chill, bra. We've got class and shit. I like Zatanna the most for her gothic magician look. While simplicity is never to be undervalued, I'd recommend looking around the forums for ideas on sticker and accessory manipulation.

 

[Norik]

Hm... are these supposed to be troll characters?

 

[NeclordX]

I think they arent bad, but could be really improved. Your original character lack...I don't know how to say it...they look like some random pieces together, they doesn't seem a character as a whole.

And "cameos"...cameos only are impressibe if you make a really popular character very close to the original, if not...is only one more guest cas in a really really large list.

 

[V.Rozaria]

Chill, bra. We've got class and shit. I like Zatanna the most for her gothic magician look. While simplicity is never to be undervalued, I'd recommend looking around the forums for ideas on sticker and accessory manipulation.

Sorry, I took this semester off and the other forums I go on aren't this... dead.
I based Zatanna off of the following pictures.

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In all honesty, Zatanna took the least amount of work to make.
What threads would you recommend I look for stickers and items? I thought about adding a bit more to my original characters but anything else I added didn't make much sense and looked too out of place.

 

[V.Rozaria]

Hm... are these supposed to be troll characters?

Really? No, only the last character is a joke one.

 

[brucege]

All you gotta to do is add some textures/patterns. Don't be afraid to clash. Just be sure to tone it down at the end. Throw in some accessories, and you'll be playing in style.

 

[KittenpasteCo]

Zatanna looks neat. :3 Finally a non-ugly use for that jacket. I can't seem to get it to look good on anyone... I can't see past it's initial ugliness into the potential. x3

I really wish we could make more twinkish males... mmm~ Catboy could look alright if he was a twink. x3

 

[V.Rozaria]

Ok, thanks for the feedback guys. Looking at my characters it does seem like they need a bit more detail to them and before I make and show new fighters, I'm going to tweak and detail my current ones and have comparisons excluding Raphael and Pan. I'm disappointed that no one liked Raphael's Vega costume and Pan though, I thought the Vega Costume was spot on to Vega's 3rd alt costume in SSFIV:AE and thought Pan looked great.

Also, I'm keeping Kunimitsu's hair as it is because if I put the Braided hairstyle(which actually was two ponytails) on, the front end of the hair goes right through the fox mask, making it look stupid as hell.

 

[BlueDoug]

Nice work on Zatanna!

 

[V.Rozaria]

Okay! I have redone Yojimbo, Kunimitsu, and Catboy and will edit them into the first post shortly after this one.
Still having trouble with Shi-kiba, not sure if I want to try to texture-ize and pattern the clothing or if I want to have him shirtless with tribal-like tattoos. I've decided not to mess with Zatanna because you guys seem to really like this "gothic" version of her.

Yojimbo

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I've switched the pants, added patterns to the clothing, added stickers to the pants, changed the colors, and added the scroll, bottle, and leaf equipment. I thought about replacing the Warrior's Coat and adding armor and pauldrons but it looked a bit awkward with the hat and mask.

Kunimitsu

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I added pants to her, changed the mask design as close as I could to her original, and changed the shoes. Here are some comparison pics.​

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I know I didn't get the hair right, the closest thing to it was the Braided hair but the front end goes right through the mask, ruining it.​

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Catboy

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Yep, nothing much changed but that's not a bad thing is it? =3​

I Gave him a collar with a bell on it, added a pattern and kitty stickers to the arms, added the hearts pattern on the ball and chain on this ankle(He's a slave), toned his muscle mass down, and added a belly tattoo! =3​

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[Alexandra]

Calligraphy Brush for Catboy?

 

[V.Rozaria]

Calligraphy Brush for Catboy?

What do you mean?

 

[Alexandra]

What do you mean?

There's a weapon...called Calligraphy Brush... Leixia style.

 

[V.Rozaria]

There's a weapon...called Calligraphy Brush... Leixia style.

Oh *derp*, is that Leixia's joke weapon? I don't have that yet, I'm only level 39.

 

[V.Rozaria]

Well, time for an update. I finally managed to change up Shi-Kiba(Hopefully for the better), and I have made two new characters. :D


Shi-Kiba

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Gione Romero (Original)(Joke)​

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Tanaka (Original)​

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The opening post has been updated.​

EDIT: Uhhh why do I have double spoilers?

 

[V.Rozaria]

This went to 2nd page so bump.

 

[V.Rozaria]

It's clear you guys don't like my creations(Excluding Zatanna), so just tell me what is wrong with them so I can create better looking fighters. Help me out here.

 

[Zergoreth]

I actually like your Shi-Kiba, Gione Romero, and Tanaka. I think they're pretty cool I'm just not that great at critiquing other people's work so I normally don't post much, but anyway I like your CaS's I hope to see more :)