@franman, thanks for the critique! I do think I was out of proportion because I was trying to be as close as to the reference picture I took of her 2A move while she was in gloomy. Thanks though, I am still learning everyday to get better and grow as an artist :) thanks for your input.
-Speedpaint of one of my favorite characters.
Tira (c) Namco Bandai & Project Soul
Illustration (c) Me
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