Atom Hikaro Creation (SC 6 Edition)

Wyldwarrior

[06] Combatant
My apologies I had no intention on being rude, I just didn't know how to respond so I didn't respond which upon retrospect was probably the worse thing I could have done, Again I apologize.
I struggle with this to so don't feel to bad. Like Herr-Krieg said just be more mindful of it in the future.
 

Wyldwarrior

[06] Combatant
This looks pretty good I like the blue on white color theme. You could probably use more patterns and/or stickers to make it pop a little though. ExEq is also helpful with making CaS stand out but I struggle with that one sometimes too.

I am also curious about the backstory Tiffany's more modern appearance and wand weapon with this angelic form give of a magical girl vibe.
 

Atom45

[09] Warrior
This looks pretty good I like the blue on white color theme. You could probably use more patterns and/or stickers to make it pop a little though. ExEq is also helpful with making CaS stand out but I struggle with that one sometimes too.

I am also curious about the backstory Tiffany's more modern appearance and wand weapon with this angelic form give of a magical girl vibe.
This is a CAS design that I have had since SC3 and I'm not really looking to make that many adjustments to it TBH

I dont have much of a Bio for her anymore since I have changed her story so much. But The basic jest is that she is the daughter of Angel who is the "daughter' of an actuall angel named Anox. So when any female down that bloodline is in the presence of Soulcalibur it awakens a otherwise dormant power. Angel also has a Angelic form but I haven't been bothered to make it yet.

The more modern look is that my OCs universe has element of Modern and Medevil elements meshed togather (Think of something like RWBY)

ExEq...I'm not familiar with that term...
 
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Wyldwarrior

[06] Combatant
This is a CAS design that I have had since SC3 and I'm not really looking to make that many adjustments to it TBH

I dont have much of a Bio for her anymore since I have changed her story so much. But The basic jest is that she is the daughter of Angel who is the "daughter' of an actuall angel named Anox. So when any female down that bloodline is in the presence of Soulcalibur it awakens a otherwise dormant power. Angel also has a Angelic form but I haven't been bothered to make it yet.

The more modern look is that my OCs universe has element of Modern and Medevil elements meshed togather (Think of something like RWBY)

ExEq...I'm not familiar with that term...
I can understand not wanting to change something because you have used it for a long time.
Thank you for explaining your backstory more and I get what you mean by modern and medieval . I've always liked the idea of mixing tech with medieval concepts.
ExEq stands for Extra Equipment the three slots at the bottom in the equipment part of the character creator.
 

Herr-Krieg

[07] Duelist
Most pretty and neat work with her ;)! The colours of blue and white work in a proper harmony and blue isn´t too bright as well. The equipment choices you picked for her are enough varieting, combining elements from Xianghuas and Sophitias gears. I also like how you screemshotted her with different poses and also having one screenshot showing her from the back a little to get the better overall picture of her. It´s also nice that you have such a clear backstory behind her, which helps to understand her concept better.

I do have to agree with Wyldwarrior that you could make her stand out more with patterns and with the use of ExEq. But I also respect your decision if you want to keep her the way she is now. Your CAS, your choice after all ;).

She looks gorgeous ;). The bust underwear works neatly with her pants and boots. The colour theme is also properly dark and grey ( but not too dark ) to bring up certain details. I like the unique idea behind her. You could have also added a screenshot showing her from behind as I kinda see such missing. As of now she looks a little bit too plain to me. Sure you bought some detailing to her By using the heart stikcer on her chest, but you could have used more sticker slots to bring some more detailing and life to her overall appearance, like stickers showing her pants being torn from knees, more tattoos etc, not to mention the seemingly lacking use of ExEq, which would make her stand out more. Now this is just my opinion, but I think her concept would come out more better with 2B style, due to its highly technological appearance, not to mention the floating robot that comes with it.

Other than that, you did good job with both of them :). Keep up the good work ;).
 

Atom45

[09] Warrior
I actually wanted to add a few other details. such as a Tattoo on her wrist and back but for one reason or another, things went wrong so I kinda had to give up on it. And I don't know why the Hell I didn't even consider 2B's style, That's actually not a bad Idea.
 

Herr-Krieg

[07] Duelist
I actually wanted to add a few other details. such as a Tattoo on her wrist and back but for one reason or another, things went wrong so I kinda had to give up on it. And I don't know why the Hell I didn't even consider 2B's style, That's actually not a bad Idea.
Well, you had your reasons, so no problems there ;). Oh sometimes even I miss such obvious solutions XD. I´m eagerly waiting how she looks with 2B style :).
 

Herr-Krieg

[07] Duelist
Pretty neat work with him ;). School uniform fits really well to Talims innocent personality and look. Colour there WISE she looks solid with the proper combination of blue shirt, somewhat green skirt and undershirt, black hair and shoes and white socks. Classes add the nice touch to her face to make her look even more of a student. She does however look rather plain and simple. You could use stickers more to give her more details and depth as well as trying to utilize all three ExEq slots to giver her more depth and special look, like giving her a school back or something school related stuff like that. Still, good job with her ;).
 

Atom45

[09] Warrior
The back pack I'm putting on some others Schoo uniform CAS but Talim particular fighting style with all the flips and spinning just seemed like I would through her balance iff to much on a real fight
 

Atom45

[09] Warrior
Friend of mine made in Soulclaibur...not much more to say about this one...

Also not sure if the collage style is better or uploading each image is let me know....
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Wyldwarrior

[06] Combatant
I think the collage style works fine but the top center image is a little blurry. Your friend looks pretty good in Soulcalibur and your previous two post also look good I especially like the bow in Talim's hair.