@ DokuganRaiyu :
I can't help it if I've written a lot of stuff since I used to be a writer - an aspiring one, that is - a few years ago. If it weren't for a massive case of writer's block, I might've already succeeded in creating masterpieces of my own by now, but alas.... ~_~
Another reason why I've written so much is that while I normally don't do so, I decided I'm trying to help out in the only way I know how ~ by giving you as much advice, tips, opinions and moral support as much as I'm able to give out (even though I'm quite stubborn, forgetful, lazy, absent-minded and idiotic sometimes....). Besides, your works of art do seem to interest me just like the others that posted in the various CaS forums, but I do feel that you could do so much more, man. I'm serious.
...In any case, here are some additional replies in response to yours:
1.) Vetala (1st and 2nd versions) : While it does saddens me that your first masterpiece gets deleted, I do approve of your decision since you do care enough to share your slots your own brother. That's good. :)
In my case, I have to share my CaS slots with my three nephews AND a neighbor! But at least, I do get most of the remaining slots left for me to do as I please. Even then, I did my best to make their creations as good as my own ~ with their own wishes and styles mixed in, of course! ~_0
The result is an incredibly mixed bag full of fun-filled goodies to see! I's too bad I don't have a camera yet, though.... Hell, I don't even have an extra modem to send the pics to the internet even though I have a PS3...! GRRR!!! >:(
...Anyway, I'm happy that you've created the second version to replace the first. After all, "One must often sacrifice the old things for new ones unless they are irreplacable and dear to you."
2.) Megara (1st and 2nd versions) :Nothing else needs to be said here except this ~
"You often need to study your own mistakes so that you'll be able to learn from them AND won't have to repeat them at the same time."
I couldn't stress this enough when it comes to perfecting whatever it is you do, even when it comes to playing vs. battles or creating in CaS mode. And speaking of which, you've already taken the first step with this character and, hopefully, I'll see more of those sooner or later....
...Which brings me to another point ~ "There is no such thing as absolute perfection because we're not perfect, yet we continuously strive for it because it brings out the feeling of true accomplishment. Too much of that passion, however, is never a good thing because it brings out too much pride and vanity, the two things which divert your attention to what you're actually supposed to do in the first place."
3.) Spero : From what I could see, don't try to make him into an Angel. He's too badass for that!
But that doesn't mean that you shouldn't experiment that idea. I mean, who knows? You probably might surprise me.... :)
4.) Regime : Hmm.... Have you ever seen Cheetara of the Thundercats fame...? If you haven't, you might wanna take a look because her skin tone might be the only thing missing to complete Regime's cheetah look and make her perfect.
5.) Pretty Boy : There are other noble colors for you to choose from. Just give yourself some time to experiment them, then see which one feels right for him. Also, you need to design and position those wings properly if you need tail coats on his costume, but you need to be patient AND objective with if you want to make this work. Otherwise, just try something else and be a bit more creative.
If you need another example of a pretty boy look, try looking for portraits of Sorin Markov from the Magic the Gathering trading card game. Then tell me what you think.... ^_^
6.) Amiri : Aside from her design, I also like what you did with her backstory, too. Kudos! :)
7.) Crono : Hmm.... No comment, I suppose.
8.) Vanitas : Damn.... That makes him even more scarier than I realized.... Gives me the chills, now that I think about it...! *~*
9.) Sazen : Alpha Patroklos' playing style is indeed difficult - but not impossible! - to master. Just try to learn his simplest moves first, then learn his more advanced attacks once you're ready for them. Take it step by step, and you should do just fine....
And also, thanks for the accessory tip! Ever since a fellow CaS creator, Gatsu showed that technique with his own version of Gatsu from Berserk in his thread, I've always had a lot of trouble thinking about how it could be done and which item I should use.... Now that you've utilized that technique well, I thought I should ask you since I kinda failed miserably at that part, so.... ^^
One last thing, I think I failed to mention this earlier, but her color scheme is also unique. That only makes her an even better masterpiece than she already is!
10.) Kanon X : There is a possibility of making someone look sexy with the correct look and concept. I do believe that there was a forum relating to the creation of beautiful women's body types somewhere in the CaS forums, but I can't remember which specific thread title was that. :(
In any case, good luck with that one since one person's taste regarding beauty is different from another, or so the saying goes.... ^^
11.) Sid : Alright, then. Here's what you'll do~
First, keep the character concept as is. Second, change some of his colors to make him more suitable except for the following parts: The gold on his armored wrists, improvised knee pads and mask; the black color of his shoulder armor and the inner part of the new centurion armor. Third, try to change the pattern on his pants to spider stickers instead since he looks good on them - especially when the pants color is black (similar to the shoulder armor).
The third part is only just optional if you're planning to give him a sinister look.
12.) Xero (1st and 2nd versions) : Hmm.... Have you tried combining both versions of her into one yet? It might be difficult, but the results would be great if you can pull it off ~ just like what I did with some of my creations to make way for others!
13.) Lilli : If you're that determined to improve on her overall design, then I shouldn't get in your way and wish you good luck, right...? ^_^
By the way, what is her personality supposed to be like? It might help you out in your design a bit more, if possible (aside from satisfying my sense of curiosity, of course).
14.) Suzaku, Christina and Tybalt : The more I look at these designs, the more I realized how badass they look. Maybe it's just me, but I do suggest you keep them all since their overall designs are alright - unless you plan to do some drastic changes.
15.) Tryl von Sia : Whoa! That cute wordplay on her name really caught me off guard, to be honest. o.O
I mean, why don't you keep that name for a future vampire design? It sounds original enough, I think.
16.) BLARGH!!!! : I say go for it! ^_^
17.) Kajibana : Alright, then. But I really like the white colors in her costume since it fits with her story. If you do wanted to make changes to her costume, what would be first one to do, if you don't mind me asking...?
18.) Freed : Because the skin tone gives off the "Mysterious, inhuman, intimidating and badass" vibe from him. You know what I mean, right?
Besides, that skin tone does also remind me a bit of Sorin Markov, too, now that I think about it.... ^^
19.) Kitsugen : Word of advice ~ do NOT remove those beads from him! It's makes him look like a badass samurai monk and it kinda compliments his war drums, too.
Seriously, man. Just leave him as is!
20.) Sun Zhilang : I'm sure we both do! By the way, man. What are her voice settings in the game?
21.) Pyung Hwa : Son Goku?! as in, SON GOKU from the Dragonball series?! Holy hell, you really got me there, dude! I actually didn't see that coming at ALL! o.O
Wow! You really impressed me now! :)
22.) Sundari and Unagi : These true masterpieces are still just as incredible as when I first saw them! And also, thanks for the notations concerning the bones of the latter, too! I better start writting them down before I forget them....
Let's see, that's ~
7, 7, 3 for the arms....
7, 7, 5 for the lower body....
4, 7, 9 for the feet....
and 4, 7, 13 for the ribs....
Yep! That's the whole gist of 'em. Thanks again for your assistance! m(_ _)m
I think I posted everything I needed to post already.... And now, if you'll excuse me, it's already morning and I need to sleep because I'm feeling incredibly dizzy now. Later, dude.... ^_^
