CaS' i made.

[Matty82]

Ah...that's what u ment, wich guy btw? And tnx i like Vanitas a lot as well, but the red on his face is flesh bec his skin got ripped off there :)
Lol i guess it's because im not good at making goodie good characters, so most of em tend to look either evil or anti-hero-ish even when im trying to make a good character :S

Btw incase you missed this question as well, have trouble using the pockter sticker right (Look at the last character of the post of mine that you qouted, if you'd plz) on Freed. For both the top part and the lower part, i had to use 4 pocket stickers on each so the sticker wouldn't mirror on the other side. Is there anyway that i can get the same result but without using as many stickers?

Oh it was Freed I was refering to. As for the sticker problem sadly I don't think theres any real way around it, the only thing I can suggest is the way I use them and thats to place them by axsis that way they cover a larger are in one go but you will probably get a different look with, but experiment and see how it looks

 

[DokuganRairyu]

Oh it was Freed I was refering to. As for the sticker problem sadly I don't think theres any real way around it, the only thing I can suggest is the way I use them and thats to place them by axsis that way they cover a larger are in one go but you will probably get a different look with, but experiment and see how it looks

Yea i've tried that but it ended up covering to much than....but ok tnx for the help anyway :)
I'll see if i can figure out any other ways of doing it.

 

[DokuganRairyu]

More P2's and some small changes that i made to Xero (per request of Brucege, the whole mix thing wouldn't really work...sry Kai) and Kanon:

First up, sexy boy Camui (no Vladimir theme tho):

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Hrmmm....i probably could've put the bat wings on his gloves or something.....oh well, maybe i'll do that later. The Zoolander look, he practised it :D

Next up is, Sazen:

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With thanks to Gatsu for the Mouth mask. The eye is symbolic btw for something in the sense of, Even tho her vision seems to have been halved, she can actually seem twice as good as regular people as she has "Eyes in the back of her head (Where i live it actually translates to having eyes in your back)." She's pretty much evil now...at first she was more like an redeeming anti-hero but after having exact her revenge she went beserk and started killing everything in her path.

Time for number 3, Sid. This is Sid after his future self possesed the younger body and he started planning on what to do to avoid his future to-be wife, while acting as the leader of the Sneeuw Wolven Roedel guard.

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And the final guy of the batch, Freed (Got a little inspiriation from Ganon):

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DerpDragon#1: Dafuq is this!? O_O
DerpDragon#2: Dafuq are you!? O_O

And the 2 modified women (no not in that way, you pervert):

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Tell me what you think :)

 

[rdmunhoz]

I really enjoyed this new group, especially Freed, the cape with the two Dragons was fantastic

 

[DokuganRairyu]

I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't really sure if i should've removed or left the dragons on Freed's cape but it seems like i made the right decision. Tnx for the feedback :)

 

[rdmunhoz]

It seems that the Dragons will fight each other

 

[DokuganRairyu]

That's the idea ye, but i wanted to use the Westernised Dragons (Wich i haven't unlocked yet bec grinding is so boring in this game) bec he's not asian...so chinese dragons don't actually fit him lol.

 

[LordDraco3]

Agreed, Freed's half/half look was accomplished REALLY well. I've tried to do similar on a body and failed, but you really pulled it off with the pants/cape. And yes, the dragons look good.

 

[DokuganRairyu]

Thank you. The half/half look is much more difficult to do on the body i think bec u need more stickers for it.
Im glad that you guys like Freed but i'd appreciate it if i could get some feedback on the other 3 as well :)

 

[LordDraco3]

I'm not too good at critiquing OCs unless something particularly impresses me, is much too cluttered, or is way too plain/generic, unfortunately ^^;

 

[Left4Dead]

Awesome as always, I just dont like the colors from Camui's pants

 

[DokuganRairyu]

I'm not too good at critiquing OCs unless something particularly impresses me, is much too cluttered, or is way too plain/generic, unfortunately ^^;

Oh ok than.

Awesome as always, I just dont like the colors from Camui's pants

Coolie. So what color do you suggest them to be?

 

[Lonewolf_Kai]

@ DokuganRairyu : Oh, wow! I'm seeing a lot of good stuff here! o.O

Alright, then.... Here's what I think of your latest works so far:



1.) Camui looks fantastic, man! That had to be the vampire pretty boy that you've been working on, right? If so, then you have my praise for making him look even better than the last version. If he isn't, well I still applaud you nonetheless for making a great effort on your work. Either way, he's incredibly awesome! ^.^

Even then, there are still things that need you need to improve on his design ~ by adding a few more dark colors like Blood Red, Dark Blue, Violet or even Black to his costume, for instance.

If you're satisfied with your current work, however, feel free to ignore that instead.... ^^



2.) Sazen really looks dangerously insane, man! Kudos to you also for making a slight update on her profile that pretty much explains her latest appearance. Another great masterpiece! :)

But I do hope you didn't erase her first version, though. I'll be quite sad, if you do....



3.) Sid looks about just as badass as his older self. I'm already impressed! ^_^

But what's even more impressive is the insignia that you've created on his leather shirt. A true original design combo that I've never seen before. Hopefully, I'll see that design again in some of your future creations.



4.) Hmm.... You've kept most of the good parts of Freed's design and simply added more to make him even more complete. The results are obviously astounding for me to see.

...And that reminds me of an old saying, "You can build a perfect machine out of imperfect parts."



5.) Xero's 2P ver. II looks much more cleaned up than the last one which made me smile with approval. Will that be your final version, or will you update her some more?

In any case, she obviously looks great. :D



6.) Kanon X's latest version is just basically making your already incredible masterpiece even 3X better than it already is! She even looks more complete now than ever before.

Now that's really impressive! :)




In all honesty, dude, I'm really speechless right now.... Just don't forget everything that you've learned so far and you can only improve even further from this point onward. I also look forward to whatever else you could create next time, DokuganRairyu.

Later!

 

[DokuganRairyu]

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@ DokuganRairyu : Oh, wow! I'm seeing a lot of good stuff here! o.O

Alright, then.... Here's what I think of your latest works so far:



1.) Camui looks fantastic, man! That had to be the vampire pretty boy that you've been working on, right? If so, then you have my praise for making him look even better than the last version. If he isn't, well I still applaud you nonetheless for making a great effort on your work. Either way, he's incredibly awesome! ^.^

Even then, there are still things that need you need to improve on his design ~ by adding a few more dark colors like Blood Red, Dark Blue, Violet or even Black to his costume, for instance.

If you're satisfied with your current work, however, feel free to ignore that instead.... ^^



2.) Sazen really looks dangerously insane, man! Kudos to you also for making a slight update on her profile that pretty much explains her latest appearance. Another great masterpiece! :)

But I do hope you didn't erase her first version, though. I'll be quite sad, if you do....



3.) Sid looks about just as badass as his older self. I'm already impressed! ^_^

But what's even more impressive is the insignia that you've created on his leather shirt. A true original design combo that I've never seen before. Hopefully, I'll see that design again in some of your future creations.



4.) Hmm.... You've kept most of the good parts of Freed's design and simply added more to make him even more complete. The results are obviously astounding for me to see.

...And that reminds me of an old saying, "You can build a perfect machine out of imperfect parts."



5.) Xero's 2P ver. II looks much more cleaned up than the last one which made me smile with approval. Will that be your final version, or will you update her some more?

In any case, she obviously looks great. :D



6.) Kanon X's latest version is just basically making your already incredible masterpiece even 3X better than it already is! She even looks more complete now than ever before.

Now that's really impressive! :)


In all honesty, dude, I'm really speechless right now.... Just don't forget everything that you've learned so far and you can only improve even further from this point onward. I also look forward to whatever else you could create next time, DokuganRairyu.

Later!

1) Camui: Yea that's the same vampire guy, just gave him a name this time. Well he does have Dark Blue, Dark Violet and Black on his outfit. I'd rather work on other chars but i might have a looksie and see if i could give him better gloves.

2) Sazen P2: Thank you. Well....like i said be4...if any char has a P2...the older one is gone. It doesn't really matter to me because i can remake em pretty easily using the pics on here as references :)

3) Sid P2: Yea, it's the emblem of his team. The Sneeuw Wolven Roedel (Snow Wolfs Pack) i find it to be pretty neat as well haha. It depends on what i'll do with his daughter, so there might be chance i'll use it again :)

4) Freed: Thanks, i like it a lot as well, definitely my most satisfying work of the 4 new chars. I like how i could give him big brows like that :D I actually thought about changing the skin for a few seconds but decided not too because i remembered that u liked it a lot.

5) Xero P2: This will be the final version for now.

6 Kanon P2: Yea i think so looks very nice as well, but 3x as good is an overstatement imo.

Yea i hope i can keep on making better CaS' than the last, we'll see what the new DLC will offer on the 3rd of April *Smirk* Btw i really am interested in seeing your work as well oh and just call me Doku or Dokugan for short.

 

[Left4Dead]

Try changing patterns, mayb its not the colours but the patterns

 

[Lonewolf_Kai]

@ DokuganRairyu :

Hey, Doku! I thought I should reply for a bit before I hit the bed soon ~


1.) I don't know about you, but I think you should let Camui keep the gloves. Besides, you did managed to match them up with the color of his boots, so it's a plus in my book! :)

But, I think you should also try out some pattern changes to his pants since they don't seem to work well with the rest of the costume, now that I've seen it again. That, and a bit of recoloring on them, too.



2.) While I'm not exactly happy that you deleted Sazen's design, I'm glad to hear that you made a back up plan in case you need to recreate her again. Smart thinking, man! ^^



4.) Oh, wow....! o_O

I guess I'll take that as a compliment, then. You really had me speechless for a second, Doku.



5.) Oh, I see. I'll look forward to your next design, then!



6.) Hmm.... I suppose you're right about that. There are other good masterpieces out there after all....

My bad! ~_~



...And that's it for now. Later! ^_^

 

[DokuganRairyu]

Try changing patterns, mayb its not the colours but the patterns

You mean on Camui? I'll see what i can do, tho i am inclined to wait for the DLC on April 3rd be4 i make any changes to P2's.

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@ DokuganRairyu :

Hey, Doku! I thought I should reply for a bit before I hit the bed soon ~


1.) I don't know about you, but I think you should let Camui keep the gloves. Besides, you did managed to match them up with the color of his boots, so it's a plus in my book! :)

But, I think you should also try out some pattern changes to his pants since they don't seem to work well with the rest of the costume, now that I've seen it again. That, and a bit of recoloring on them, too.



2.) While I'm not exactly happy that you deleted Sazen's design, I'm glad to hear that you made a back up plan in case you need to recreate her again. Smart thinking, man! ^^



4.) Oh, wow....! o_O

I guess I'll take that as a compliment, then. You really had me speechless for a second, Doku.



5.) Oh, I see. I'll look forward to your next design, then!



6.) Hmm.... I suppose you're right about that. There are other good masterpieces out there after all....

My bad! ~_~



...And that's it for now. Later! ^_^

1.) I wasn't going to remove the gloves, just add bat wings to em. I'll have a look at him after we get the April 3rd DLC.

2.) Thanks ^_^

4.) It's cool man.

Well...i've been sick for these past few days and as weird as it sounds...i think my sickness made me more creative @_@ I made a dragon, and a vampire gothic lolita....and i think they look good actually.

 

[DokuganRairyu]

Here are 4 more CaS' that i made i'll start with the ugliest (imo) one and work my way up from there:

Chayyliel:

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Waaaaayyyy different from what i actually wanted her to look like.

Vanitas:P2

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He went from a werewolf...to a dragon (or something like it)...shit happens :) The rainbow stuff is just because of.....randomness.

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Regime P2:

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Nothing much, just made her look more cheetah like and gave her new clothes/armor.

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Tryl von Sia (Re-imagining of Tryl von Sia and Lilli):

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Ok ok where do i begin...Ok. I didn't the sight of a vampress using Elysium's style so i deleted Tryl and used her vampress concept on Lilli to make something of a Gothic loli vampress, wich in turn is my go at a modern looking character.

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That's all for now, plz tell me what you think.
Dunno why the double spoiler thing happened @_@

 

[chobek]

I think the color scheme on Regime P2 works better than the first regime... I always liked the character but I found the colors and patterns on the clothes a little distracting on version 1.
also I like your thumbnails (esp.Tryl von Sai)... they seem to tell a story...

 

[Lonewolf_Kai]

@ DokuganRaiyu :


Oh, man...! I'm sorry to hear that you're sick right now. I hope you get well soon.... :(

...Anyway, it seems that you're creation streak is indeed rising. Before I get on to it, though, I also really do hope that the upcoming changes to the system and the CaS new parts that they're going to add are going to be all worth it, making the game better than it already is. Now, then:



1.) Chayyliel : Hmm.... =/

While I do like the way you did with her thumbnail, her overall design feels... lacking, I think. If this is indeed a prototype version of what you've had in mind, then perhaps I can wait until you get her design done properly, at the very least. Bonus points to you for making those shoulder pads connect naturally with her gauntlets!

Just improve on her overall design and don't give up on her yet. While we're at it, color her well, too. You can do it, Doku! ^_^



2.) Vanitas 2P : Oh, my...! I didn't expect you to make a 2P version of him at all! o.O

While your work on his skin looks really nice, I couldn't help but raise my eyebrows at the rest of his costume. One of my suggestions for tweaking his looks would be to give him the bone dragon mask DLC. It somehow feels fitting for him since you mentioned the word, "Dragon" after all.

...Or perhaps you we're going for a mere reptilian look with dragon skin...? In any case, I do like your ideas for this guy, Doku. Just tweak 'em a bit, and you should do just fine. Kudos to you for coloring his eyes right! ^^



3.) Regime 2P : Good use of the jade colors in addition to the cheetah skin tone! I'm really impressed that you've just made another character even better than before, and it shows! :)



4.) Tryl von Sia : This version - or perhaps I should say a fusion between two of your old characters into a single new one, that is - looks incredibly magnificent, Doku! I believed that I just witnessed another masterpiece before me! o.O

Well done, I say! Well done! :D

And also, did you get inspiration from Morrigan of Darkstalkers fame? If so, that would explain her hair color. But, man, I've never seen jade eyes work so well with the rest of her costume like that! Speaking of the rest of her costume, I do love the color combination that you did with her flower patterns, Doku. Hell, even the skull and her cute hat look incredibly decent, too!

...Seriously, man, I could go on forever here, you know? And if you decided to add a little more details to make her look even better, it would be overkill! To be honest, I might also wonder what the rest of our fellow creators in the forums would think of your new design, but I believe she's already perfect fine as she is. Even then, I suppose a bit more to enhance her charm would look nice at this point. If you do, try not to overdo it, though....^^



I guess that's all for now. But before I go, I need to give you a heads up that some of your designs in this thread were removed by Photobucket - and that includes your first version of Sazen! o_O

Since you were planning to remake some of your older designs based on what you've already posted days or weeks earlier in this thread, I suggest you do something about it soon.... Double-check your work!

...As for the double spoiler thing, it's just a glitch, I think. It isn't the first time this happened, though, so don't worry about it....





@ chobek : I agree! :)