S3v3nt33ns Original Characters!!!

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S3V3NT33N

[08] Mercenary
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I know this isnt an introduction thread, but hello my name is s3v3nt33n!! I really really enjoy creating characters, i do my best to get the characters to look as if they were characters within the soul calibur series! Though I admire the anime and comic recreations in this soul, i get tired of seeing the same ones lol, so i hope you guys enjoy my charcters that i post, If you guys would like the formula for the characters that i Post I have no problem giving them out.
 
So this first character is Emma. I really Wanted to make a young energetic character you who was like i knight/scout in training, i think i achieved that with this character Emma, Personaly I find her to be my favorite character that I have created, especially since she plays like Cassandra!! Please critique i have no problem with constructive criterion!!!
 
The bad:
Emma....could use better outfit. It feels like she lost her armor and said, "Oh well, I'll just fight like this." *gets killed easy*

Not a great way to start. Give her armor, but make it stylish with some girly features.


The good:
Her facial features, hairstyle and color, eye color are very captivating. They look innocent and full of life to me. The body is great as well, it's not overly exaggerated like big boobed chicks. All in all, she looks nice but again could use a better outfit.

The head band must stay!!! It provides a charm with her imho.

I like girly energetic chicks and would like to help you if you'd like.

Please tell me more about her.
 
Yes!!!! Finally, i really appreciate what you and I will definitively use what you have provided, i never really hadnt though of a story, I didn't think about posting it up here but I think it will help everybody understand my characters, but yes id would like you help!!
the reason i didnt put any pants on her is because i couldnt find anything that fit her character, i felt limited with what i to choose from,, but what amazes me is how your spot on in how i described her to myself, the voice i use for is the voice 1.
 
I agree completely with Pocky. Give the poor girl some pants. :P

Warrior's trousers are great. They work for pretty much everything.
 
S3V3NT33N said:
Yes!!!! Finally, i really appreciate what you and I will definitively use what you have provided, i never really hadnt though of a story, I didn't think about posting it up here but I think it will help everybody understand my characters, but yes id would like you help!!
the reason i didnt put any pants on her is because i couldnt find anything that fit her character, i felt limited with what i to choose from,, but what amazes me is how your spot on in how i described her to myself, the voice i use for is the voice 1.
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If story becomes a problem, you could always mingle with my CAS built for everyone's convenience. I mean a female character of mine got married to someone else's CAS that's a good male(of course I got the creator's consent). I'm no story expert, but this thread is happened to help me get an understanding on certain people's characters I like: http://8wayrun.com/threads/misfortune-cas-comics.8180/

However, you can read that whenever you feel like it. It's for the bored and weary warriors that need something to entertain themselves on. I will forewarn you that Pocky Yoshi is the mascot of it and he's the character that enjoys attractive ladies. Your Emma is not safe. The theme of the thread is just some humor and some hangout spot for everyone's CAS they shared their formula so I can have them meet my CAS and others.
 
Wow Thanks so much!! originally she her color scheme was a different color like green, and lime green hair too but i changed it to this.

Seriously thank you I appericiate it man!!!
 
No problem. :D

Do you make stories for your characters?

Edit: Just reread that other post, hurr. Like Pocky said, if you ever need help with stories, his comics are a great place to start. As long as you don't mind lulz. :P
 
I took the pictures showing how he looks when his amour is broken off!! because the amour break on CAS is horrible, so i though of a crompramise, i think the characters should look Badass still when there amour is broken of, i do my best to incorporate that in all my characters, though it can be a little challenging at times lol!!
Spelling off my bad!!!! XD
 
I really LOVE Perse-whatever's colors. Give her more clothing though, her top and bottom look unbalanced.
 
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