Originality

ShadowZone said:
tbh I tried to make Tarein far from that, without putting too much actual armour on her. That's probably why she looks so vanilla-looking ._.
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But thats why this cas is not the best in my opinion. Because in 3, layers gave you more options. Remember: subtracting clothes is not an excuse for creativity *glares at zwei*. XD I liked it anyway.
 
Right.

Not very good, but I took these a while ago.

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Murasame said:
What changes are you looking for if there needed one exactly? The thing is that I don't put my expectations super high in terms of background stories for CAS (not implying that yours is bad here), so it depends on what you're looking for. Then maybe I can (sort of) give a feedback, haha.
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feedback would be ool, as i have never written a profile for a character
 
When it comes to everything i've made in CAS i would say it is my own. obviously i look at things that interest me and reference it but i try my best with what little options you have in SCIV to make it unique to what i want.
 
bushy21 said:
feedback would be ool, as i have never written a profile for a character
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Well, In my opinion: Never worry too much about blood type or sign. People tend to get wrapped up in that. The background story never has to be trauma induced or dark. Think of your character as any other human being. Put them in a situation that is defining, but do not let it be the sole character maker.

Best thing to remember when making the back story is that there needs to be character growth and depth. I can not stress that enough.
 
Mamoru_Hasukage said:
Well, In my opinion: Never worry too much about blood type or sign. People tend to get wrapped up in that. The background story never has to be trauma induced or dark. Think of your character as any other human being. Put them in a situation that is defining, but do not let it be the sole character maker.

Best thing to remember when making the back story is that there needs to be character growth and depth. I can not stress that enough.
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cool, well the one for my other char who wears belle skirt, is going to be slightly similar to mina
 
bushy21 said:
feedback would be ool, as i have never written a profile for a character
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You pretty much have the "when she was a child", "what made her character today" and "now she's traveling because" parts, which composed a pretty basic but effective profile I think. The only nitpick I'd have would be sentence structures and such like this one:

"she grew up absent of any direct family other than the others who were take who were soon to become victims of the malicious routines of the Order."

I guess you meant "other than those who were taken and who were soon to become the Order's victims" or something like that. It's just a question of putting periods so that a sentence doesn't seem running for too long and trying various pronouns/prepositions instead of "of" and "who". Again, like I stated, those are my personal nitpicks.

Other than that, it works for me! I also agree with Mamoru about a character not always needing the trauma/dark past to make their character. It could be part of them, but would be best not to let it define them or they might have a big chance falling to the "super typical" category. It's different if that's what you aim for with certain characters because it could actually work. What's "super typical" could also be "super appropriate" if you catch my drift.
 
Murasame said:
You pretty much have the "when she was a child", "what made her character today" and "now she's traveling because" parts, which composed a pretty basic but effective profile I think. The only nitpick I'd have would be sentence structures and such like this one:

"she grew up absent of any direct family other than the others who were take who were soon to become victims of the malicious routines of the Order."

I guess you meant "other than those who were taken and who were soon to become the Order's victims" or something like that. It's just a question of putting periods so that a sentence doesn't seem running for too long and trying various pronouns/prepositions instead of "of" and "who". Again, like I stated, those are my personal nitpicks.

Other than that, it works for me!
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thanks for the feedback, yeah I can see what you mean.
 
Yay! I finished the coloring XD. Click the picture to see in full view.

I really like how this came out... except for the background, i really fail at those T.T.
If you have a deviantART account, and you'd like to leave a comment or a fav, you can view the picture here http://fav.me/d4dzxyf

Tell me what you think of it :3
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Now if you'll excuse me, i have to go sleep. I stayed up all night doing this haha
 
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