DarkRhythm's CaS Lair

I only put saturation up all the way up if I'm making a cartoon character lol. I like all of them except for mech. Too mustardy. Maybe a rust color?
Mech doesn't look right with that color. Idk what type of soldier you are going for but maybe try out one of the camo patterns if you have them. The bronze and black on his shirt should definitely stay. That section of him is perfect. Since you seem to want him mechanized you should try out the Iron Mask (i think that's what it's called) and see how it looks for you.

rust is what i was going for but it failed. Thanks for the feedback :) . I am going to take down him sett to rework them :D . I will work on them and a few new ones and post tommorow or tonight :D

And I know I am no CaS genius like Gatsu or anything but I am trying and thanks to everyone for helping me see what my mistakes are.
 
And I know I am no CaS genius like Gatsu or anything but I am trying and thanks to everyone for helping me see what my mistakes are.

This, right here, is the correct attitude.

Pocky already covered anything I was going to say - The colours are uninspiring and hurt the designs overall, meaning none of them have any real oomph.

However the fact that you're taking these things on board, and using them to improve rather than whinge, is admirable. Looking at some of the equipment choices, it's clear there's a lot of potential here, so I'll be watching this thread eagerly, and encourage others to do so too.

It's always nice seeing new faces in the CaS. We may not get taken too seriously, but we're a nice bunch and still part of the community nonetheless.

=]:}D
 
I have run out of creative ideas currently. Does anyone have any unique ideas that I might be able to try and make into a creative CaS?
 
I have run out of creative ideas currently. Does anyone have any unique ideas that I might be able to try and make into a creative CaS?

Just Google random things. One method would be to think of it as an RPG, and what kind of "Class" you want to make, or look through other people's CaS gallery for inspiration. Trying to remake something often leads to you going a different path entirely!
 
Hmmm, I use Valkirie Profile Einherjar......great ideas come from they....
Hmmm, Also try the dark lord secretariat.......
Hmmm I like the colors, and the somewhat noble looks...
 
This, right here, is the correct attitude.

Pocky already covered anything I was going to say - The colours are uninspiring and hurt the designs overall, meaning none of them have any real oomph.


=]:}D
May I ask, If any, Which of the CaS's you liked? And if so what about them. If you did not like any feel free to say that. I would like an honest opinion.
 
May I ask, If any, Which of the CaS's you liked? And if so what about them. If you did not like any feel free to say that. I would like an honest opinion.

Certainly~!

Rose is by far my favourite. The Woeful Aketon/Ninja Pants is a unique mix, and the bright red really makes her stand out, and the gold makes an excellent tertiary colour for Black/Red, so the whole design has a nicely rounded, complete feel. She's not overloaded with details, but she's not bland either. The only thing I'm uncertain of is the waist-chain, but I don't know why.

Red is a nice selection of equipment, but the colouring is too dull to look at. Brown, red and yellow? Not a nice mix, unless you're a hot dog. He just lacks anything to make me remember him by - Too many faded colours make him forgettable. But as mentioned, I actually like the character, and the equipment choices are spot on, if ill-befitting someone of high military rank.

Azaiah is interesting. Kind of a medieval/Japanese look, which manages to scrape by being a "generic theif" because of the culture mix. Sadly though the colour issue is the same as Red - Too many dull, dreary colours, with patterns that make them more eye-churning. Again though, a solid concept and a strong base indeed!

The rule of thumb is that muter shades promote realism, but it's always good to throw a stronger colour into the works too, otherwise realism becomes obscurity.
 
Not to like...Revive a really old thread but since my SCV data corrupted I lost all my CaS and the reason I stopped posting them is because I find it hard to delete them. But in the upcoming weeks ill be creating some fresh new ones and ill try and post them for you all to rate or do whatever it is you do.(Although capture card is broken so anyone have any ideas of how to get a decent quality picture?)
 
Have you ever thought of doing backups using cloud / usb cards, that would not only prevent you from such
horrible incident, but also allow you to expand your roster to...say...400 CAS like i am closing in on :)

Really sad to hear though Darkrythm
 
Digital camera + sports mode + a lot of patience and scrapped pics
Make online battles and use replay mode as it gives you more freedom and better pics
 
You have some promising work here. My favorite is Dark Rhythm. If you're outta ideas, go do some of the many challenges! I personally recommend starting off with recreations, since those teach you most of the techniques you need for your originals.
 
So in response to Vilarcane's amazing CaS interpretation of my story I sent him I am going to post the first chapter(P.S. This is set before the snippet I sent Vilarcane so its all new). I am in no way an amazing writer or storyteller so this is my way of telling the story without trying to be crazy boring. I will post an OLD picture of my SCIV CaS(When this chapter takes place) because I have nothing else to take it with(My next CaS pictures will be better I promise haha). Please feel free to leave HONEST feedback. Don't like it? Hate it? Let me know and why you think that way. So without further delay, The first chapter

Ater’s Story

1.- The beginning of a journey

Ater walked up the circling stairs of the immense tower with only one thing in mind. The past. Since he was a child he had enjoyed martial arts and weapons far more than any other child at the large castle he lived in at the time. Ater grunted to himself as he thought back to those times.-I don’t need those memories- After all, He had forsaken the place he once called home to roam the world in search of his father who had left to help in the wars against Soul Edge.

He left his home at the age of 14 only to find the world to be filled with cruel, unforgiving people and demonic creatures. Once during his journey he was caught in a city as it was under siege by the fabled and legendary monster, the Azure Nightmare. He ran from the burning buildings through the streets until he came into an opening. With a sword bigger than himself raised in the air and a demonic light emanating from it, the massive horned creature devoured the souls of the knights standing to oppose him. Ater fell to his knees not in despair but in amazement of the truly awesome power that Nightmare contained. Nightmare slowly walked over to Ater and raised his massive sword overhead preparing to bring it down. Ater closed his eyes as the sword began to fall…Only for him to hear the sound of the sword clashing against steel.

He looked up to see a large dark skinned man with an also massive scythe blocking the sword. The man repelled Nightmares sword back into the air then quickly made a gesture with his hand creating a circular magic wall blocking Nightmares way. In an instant he turned around, picked up Ater, and started running back towards where Ater had come from. After a minute or so of running he set Ater down and looked at him “This is no place for a chi-“ He stopped and looked into Ater’s left eye with his own mysterious golden one as if reading his very soul. “I see… very strange things in your future boy. Today is not your day to die.” He walked closer to Ater and extended his arm holding out his scythe, “I had planned on returning and confronting Nightmare, but something told me you should have this. You are not like others. Even some of the strongest warriors in the world cower in fear before Nightmare and you didn’t even bat an eye. I don’t know your story child but with this you might make your own one day.” Ater took the scythe, Eyes wide in confusion over the fact that not even two minutes ago he was standing face to face with the legendary Nightmare of the end and now he was receiving a strange scythe from an even stranger man with a golden eye.

Before he could even begin to try and say his awkward response the man knocked him unconscious and set him off to the side in one of the buildings that was not yet destroyed. “That kid would have tried to catch another glimpse of Nightmare…No doubt in my mind. I do not know what the future holds for this one but it won’t be any average tale to tell.” With that the man walked out into the street and started towards Nightmare once again.

Ater shook his head as he continued his ascent up the tower. Unusually large scythe in hand.
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Fun read, and the SCIV char ain't too shabby (he look kinda like a Final Fantasy guy :)
Thanks for the credits again, and i'll be lurking for your SCV iteration and the rest of the story...
 
Fun read, and the SCIV char ain't too shabby (he look kinda like a Final Fantasy guy :)
Thanks for the credits again, and i'll be lurking for your SCV iteration and the rest of the story...
Thanks ^.^ I think I need to learn to be a bit better at expressing how it happens in my head. I am trying to rewrite the next chapter to sound a bit less boring and be a bit more engaging. As for my SCIV character yeah hes not too fantastic but I always liked his outfit personally. The picture doesn't show it but he has a bit more red on him.

Ill be on the watch for your stuff too(And I will try to give you some in depth feedback thats more that just "Awesome" haha)
 
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