Lazy Garou
[10] Knight
Ook, heres something for people to review, one of my CAS characters:
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I believe you called her Sindanne on your personal gallery. I like the vivid red that you use as a primary color. Very eye-catching. The gold highlights on the pauldrons, shirt, skirt, and boots add both contrast and detail to the design. The boots look plain by comparison though, so consider swapping them out for some bump-mapped long boots,. Or maybe the Valkyrie DLC boots. Another thing I'd change is the color distribution. You notice that everything from the knees up is red while everything below is brown. You can break up that big block of red by simply turning that belt brown. You could also throw on a random belt/holster upper body equipment to carry the brown color up top (I do this way too often). Another option is coloring the sleeves some different color like white, which achieves color separation without over-complicating the color scheme. If you feelin' fancy, you could try bump mapping the sleeves by placing zipper stickers (which stretch out nicely) on the left and right sleeves. Don't know if it'll work, but it's worth a shot. The equipment you chose looks good. Especially the exposed belly from the jester top. You could try swapping the cloth bracers for Natsu's DLC gloves for a similar look with extra detailing. You also gotta find some way to spend those last two SpecEq slots. At the bare minimum, throw on on earrings. For my own creations, if I have nothing else to do with the SpecEq, I usually use the slots to add some hair extensions using horns, feathers, or crescent moons. Hell, if you have extra sticker slots, you can also extend hair with stuff like the golden bird sticker or ribbon sticker.
Here you go.
It's clear as the Montana sky that Liberty's tryin' to be as 'Murrican as possible rather than sleek n' sexy. Thankfully though, your reviewer happens to be full, red-blooded (Asian) American, and your creation ain't half bad lookin' either. You done real good by the color balancing. Just the right level of matching. Like the ocean's endless blue to the all-seein' eyes of white Jesus (jk, who knows). Red and white primary colors. Blue on the epaulettes, pants, and belt. And of course, it's gotta be an Eagle. That cape's pretty epic too. And props on layering the patterns, square, and star. Once you start deckin' out yo threadz in a similar fashion, you'll be goin' pro. Fine weapon choice too. Chara name + Patroklos style = liberty and justice for all.Please review my CAS character, Liberty.
Please forgive the below standard quality. 360 doesn't have the built in snap feature the PS3 has, so I had to use my phone to do this.
I appreciate the response but why are you acting like the entire United States is like Texas? I made this because I saw a bunch of Captain Americas online, so I decided to make a patriotic superhero of my own.It's clear as the Montana sky that Liberty's tryin' to be as 'Murrican as possible rather than sleek n' sexy. Thankfully though, your reviewer happens to be full, red-blooded (Asian) American, and your creation ain't half bad lookin' either. You done real good by the color balancing. Just the right level of matching. Like the ocean's endless blue to the all-seein' eyes of white Jesus (jk, who knows). Red and white primary colors. Blue on the epaulettes, pants, and belt. And of course, it's gotta be an Eagle. That cape's pretty epic too. And props on layering the patterns, square, and star. Once you start deckin' out yo threadz in a similar fashion, you'll be goin' pro. Fine weapon choice too. Chara name + Patroklos style = liberty and justice for all.
Now I ain't tryin' to be Big Brotha, but a couple things to remember. Having a single star's great, symbolizing one nation under God, but the flag's gotta have exactly 13 stripes, representing the 13 colonies that declared independence from Great Britain in 1777. In addition, the proper vertical display for the flag should have the blue square and stars in the upper left corner. I know you don't mean no disrespect, but if you goin' for the all-American look, there's thangs you just gotta do.
The fight ain't over yet, my friend. Keep on truckin', and the truth will come your way.
For life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness.why are you acting like the entire United States is like Texas?
It's like that mainly because getting the stripes to look right on the flag was a real pain in the ass. I can't really be picky.Reminder that one star and eleven stripes is the flag of Liberia.
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Is she supposed to be an original character or is she based off a WoW NPC? Kinda curious. Anyways, she's lookin' good. Just personalize the design a bit. Good luck.
Welcome, Chris! Lovely little creation. The stripe pattern is soft and feminine. It flows well with the light, airy clothes, which suits the kawaii Egyptian theme. The gold necklace, waist-wrap, and sandals contribute detail, and the red jewels on the belt add a bit of contrast. Kinda cute how the hair braid pokes out from under the hood too. Definitely blacken the hair, brown the skin, and apply the Cleopatra makeup (turquoise/black preset) for more Egyptian feel. Also, you can tuck a pair of horns under the hood and apply a striped pattern to it to make a hair extension. Or you could also apply some black stickers on the head to approximate hair under the hood. Overall, it's a simple yet tasteful design. And I like how she looks totally stoned in that first picture lol.Might as well post on of most original CaS here, Mintay: View attachment 42263 View attachment 42264 View attachment 42265
Oh damn. I didn't even notice the tramp stamp. Awesome shit. And yeah. Clothing extension on skin works best with straight black (0,43,0) stickers. Lookin' good, man. Mind if I post my own version of Mintay? Like, a twin sister or something?I made some improvements to Mintay. I made her skin browner and her hair slightly darker: View attachment 42272
The browner complexion makes her tattoo stand out more: View attachment 42273
I didn't want to give her black and turquoise for make up since I felt the colors stand out too much. So I went for the same colors on her tattoo. I don't want her wearing a lot of makeup. You can see how discreet her lipstick color is. I also used the horns to give her bangs.
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I tried giving her a tube top, (Love the tutorials on CaSs btw!) but it looks like she's wearing body paint than a tube top. View attachment 42275
It doesn't mesh will with the undergarments I already had for her before: View attachment 42276
Even the default piece sticks out too much: View attachment 42277
When I made her I wanted her to be more a cutesy/fanservicey character. I continued to work on her and to what you see now:
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Her battle damaged look:
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I really enjoy finding this forum and love all the input when making detailed creations. So I apologize if my CaSs look too simple or bland. Like I said before tutorials are very helpful. I'm using them to alter a friend's creation to make it look like she's being corrupted by Soul Edge.
Oh damn. I didn't even notice the tramp stamp. Awesome shit. And yeah. Clothing extension on skin works best with straight black (0,43,0) stickers. Lookin' good, man. Mind if I post my own version of Mintay? Like, a twin sister or something?
Hmm...this one's a little harder for me to comment on since she's wearing so little. I see that the white flowers are sprouting out of her panties. I suppose it could be interpreted as a symbol of fertility, but I'm proly over-thinking it. The head ornaments are an interesting choice. They do look somewhat Egyptian, so they complement the toga. I don't see as much of a coherent message as I do for Mintay, but she certainly does fit the bill for fan service. If I might make a humble suggestion, perhaps you could try making some warrior/armored characters? Much more opportunity for details, layering, etc. Keep up the good work, mate!*snip*
The makeup choice is character-appropriate. There's at least that.snip