MY CAS THREAD

[CjHN3X]

I will adding some pics of some notable characters that i've made originally on here in a couple of days - - - since I've broken my damned controller again.

 

[CjHN3X]

let's start with the significant ones.

Alcoa (Original Art Creation)

Yukitachi Hinata (Original)

more coming, later on . . . .

critiquing my videos is fair enough since i've been fighting people early in the morning. since i'm going to be really busy in the afternoons and evenings, thanks to school, i can't come up a reasonable excuse.

 

[Tsurugi]

Alcoa
Nothing much to say about her....

Yukitachi Hinata
Simple but quite likable design.
I think she would benefit from some more patterns or maybe a sticker or two though.

 

[Pocky-Yoshi]

I'd really like to see whole outfits for both of these characters before I give my critique.

 

[DarkSoul]

Looks to my some good chars but a complete view will give a better look on youre complete characters

 

[CjHN3X]

Alcoa

Yukitachi Hinata

Me

Leona

 

[DarkSoul]

Look thats much better
i like youre chars anyway (wich angle you take the shots) PS3 camera?

 

[CjHN3X]

i take screenshots of these on the ps3. press the ps button and go to photos; you should see "save screenshot" whenever you're in creation mode. about the angles - - - it depends.

 

[DarkSoul]

i have an X-Box sow i haven't a picture function but i take my own pictures with my own camera....
if u wanna see it check my topic

 

[CjHN3X]

Terra

Olympia

Celine

Judith Ashe

 

[Pocky-Yoshi]

Well, they're plain with a little derp in them. However, they have potential to be something more. I'm just not sure what some of them are supposed to be.

 

[CjHN3X]

Most of my creations are usually original ideas; few are anime-style.

 

[CjHN3X]

Here are some examples. . . . . these are some of my original characters from my fanfic "LunarFate"; not to confuse you with the RPG game or other counterfeits, my version features some of my original characters + some "Tsukihime", "Fate" and "Kara no Kyoukai" characters. It's kinda of like Onimusha in a sense.

Utan

Kilitia (Utan's Sister)

Satsuki & Luvia (LunarFate Edition)

I only have the 1st two stories complete. If you want to read it, it's availiable @ d3sl.webs.com.

 

[DarkSoul]

Very nice new Creations you have added

 

[CjHN3X]

I forgot to add some more yesterday.

Dark Sakura (LunarFate Edition)

Saber

Ciel

Ukari (Utan's Midnight Bliss Form)

 

[CjHN3X]

Athena (The King Of Fighters '97)

Feena Fam Ashlight (Crescent Love - Yoake Mae yori Ruriiro na)

Samantha/Edith (Original Creations)

 

[CjHN3X]

Haru Makoto (LunarFate)

Sorceress (Dragon's Crown)

Kris (Original Character)

 

[Pocky-Yoshi]

Excluding Athena, Sorceress, and Saber looking similar to your originals, my initial vibe from these CAS is simple yet bland version of Fate Stay Night.

FSN is a bit over the top on some anime designs...even simple ones. If I were some random ignorant person who knew nothing of this anime or what you're trying show, I'd write them off as bad weeaboo anime customs that are forgettable.

The thing is, your CAS lack charisma to advertise your fanfic LunarFate. It's just "hi I'm a person with a sword" and not "Hi I'm definitely a Fate Stay Night look alike, but I'm actually from LunarFate". Regardless, keep on posting more and ask for help to improve them.

 

[CjHN3X]

I'm quite positive I have some supporters for my fanfic "LunarFate"; I was pushing for this to be an actual movie, but it was still imcomplete. I had to start from the beginning; mainly because Utan's character was overpowered in my 1st two stories.

 

[CjHN3X]

Other than that . . . if forgot add some more pics.

Claire/Lisa (Original Creations)

Ed (Ed, Edd and Eddy)

May (Ed, Edd and Eddy)

Patchouli Knowledge (Touhou)

I couldn't find a good jacket for Ed. :(