8WayRun Fanfiction: The Writer's Block

It went well until Zwei said, "Ok then. Good-bye Viola." After that, everything seemed rushed and I really don't think Zwei would give up and say something like that. Add in some more gestures on his part and make him seem uncomfortable and disbelieving at what Viola is saying. More objection from him and the reasons why he loves her is recommended. And Elysium seems too enthusiastic. Make her more calm and collected while at the same, portray the fact that she's pleased with Viola for what she's done. Btw, are you writing your story in order or on scenes you will incorporate into your story? It's best if you go in order ninja; things will be flow more smoothly. Hope that helps.
(>^-^)
It was like none of the weddings in real life I went too. Still very entertaining though. I couldn't really find anything wrong with it Darkwings!
Thx for reading it over <3
 
Random work I did for Poetry assignment in class. Enjoy, also, re-worked Emily's Song.

This Tensioned Contentment

Idle thoughts
Idle mind
Idle hands
With all the time

Summers reappear, carry away
All care and concerns of day to day

As I may
As I might
As I do
This can’t be right

Older now, about high time to learn
Cast daydream aside, for props must turn



That Which I Cannot Cope
The young girl grins at me, photographed proud of her new tennis racquet and trophy
I wonder if she smiles even now, beneath the mangled SUV
Highway strewn with toys and brightly colored cups
Pale bodies, pale snow
Retch and try not to think
Long for the next distraction
Besides, now I’m late for work


Without Success

Try try
Do or die
Not die...
That's no fun at all

Try your best, but you may not succeed
And if you fail, take solace in this at least

Eagles may soar high among the clouds
But squirrels don't get sucked through jet engines


Emily's Song - take two


Staring into the black
My solitary friend
Pin voices to the dolls
How we love to pretend

With my teacher and I
Below these shattered stars
Yearning for the chorus
Of guns and crashing cars

Shadow we shall confide
(Tell me your secrets)
No matter where I hide
(Beneath the stair)
All that's false has turned true
(And I’m coming for)
They are going to get
You


It is never enough
Loss and blood and cries
Revulsions will not cease
Until the wicked dies

"My dear, let us begin"
Soft words caress my ear
Finger falls to trigger
As I suppress my fear


Push the knife
Pull the trigger
It’s your end
And my choice
Let's pretend
Add another voice
 
It went well until Zwei said, "Ok then. Good-bye Viola." After that, everything seemed rushed and I really don't think Zwei would give up and say something like that. Add in some more gestures on his part and make him seem uncomfortable and disbelieving at what Viola is saying. More objection from him and the reasons why he loves her is recommended. And Elysium seems too enthusiastic. Make her more calm and collected while at the same, portray the fact that she's pleased with Viola for what she's done. Btw, are you writing your story in order or on scenes you will incorporate into your story? It's best if you go in order ninja; things will be flow more smoothly. Hope that helps.
(>^-^)

Thx for reading it over <3
Yes, it was a little rushed, sorry. I'll try to change the things you said. Its not in order, I'm just jotting down things and waiting for you guyses(I know, terrible grammar. XD) critism. I take all of it to heart by the way. T^T
 
Yes, it was a little rushed, sorry. I'll try to change the things you said. Its not in order, I'm just jotting down things and waiting for you guyses(I know, terrible grammar. XD) critism. I take all of it to heart by the way. T^T

We don't mean to be anything but constructive, Ninja.
 
I know! That's what I meant by saying I take it all to heart by trying to use it to be a better writer.

Oh no, wasn't saying anything other than that! Hell, I don't take criticism very well (and if we're all honest, who does?), and I get to have my stuff looked over by a author with a masters degree.

Becoming better writers, well, that's what we're all here for! :)

Holy shit, just got an email from my prof about him wanted to put my poem in our schools little art book...... e eeeeeeee!
 
Raphael Sorel, guided by a mysterious fortune teller and his vampiric instincts travels across the world to find his daughter, on a journey that will challenge his strength as well as his heart, facing familiar foes and personal demons alike.

Starring Leonardo DiCaprio
 
Raphael Sorel, guided by a mysterious fortune teller and his vampiric instincts travels across the world to find his daughter, on a journey that will challenge his strength as well as his heart, facing familiar foes and personal demons alike.

Starring Leonardo DiCaprio
Nice premise for your story/movie.
 
As of late, I've been writing my fanfiction stories, The Real World: Soul Calibur Style, Soul Calibur X Tekken: The Office, and Detective Kilik as well as being co-writer for Xianghuafan85's Soul Calibur TV. I don't want to overwhelm myself with these projects but I'll limit myself to 5. So therefore, the name of my newest fanfiction will be called, "The Saviors of the Soul". Originally, I wanted to call it by its working title, "The Saviors" but I'm not sure whether or not I should have this as the main title because it is too vague and could mean anything.

Premise: EdgeMaster assembles a group of warriors to save the previous wielders of Soul Calibur from being sacrificed for their souls in a grand ritual to strengthen Soul Edge as well as to weaken the spirit sword and condemn its existence. Takes place during Soul Calibur IV.

Hopefully, if this fanfiction bodes well, I plan on making a sequel.
 
Cool! I got a fanfiction account as well. ^^ I've written a fanfic of my OC called "Joey the Ronin Samurai: Chronicles of the Sword" I put allot of thought and did my homework on this one, intigrating movie scenes from SC3 which helped me in developing the story as well as reading into the chapters of the chronicle games. There's a bit of a star wars crossover at some point which I was working to lead it into how the guest characters comes into play, and an intigration of Onimusha too. ^^

Chronicles is completed, but I have not yet typed and posted the rest of the chapters. Been having allot of technical difficulties that's unbelievable.

I'm currently working on a SC3 sequel that will lead to sc4. I'll provide a link to my account later. I got some stuff to do now. ^^
 
You have a fanfiction as well? So do I. I look forward to reading some of your content.

Thanks! I'd like to read your's also. This lap top is borrowed, so it may be difficult for me to be consistant. I'll try. Oh hey! Are you also on Deviant Art? Cool! I have an account there too. ^^ Very nice to meet you.
 
Well of course not. It just had a spell of writer's block ;)

I look forward to your work ^_^
Lulz, I see what you did there.

I have a lot of things to straighten out with my stories. Dreaming About a Nightmare's ending was God awful, I don't even know why I rushed on it. You Ungrateful Greek was too hardcore, so I had to erase it. Now I gotta make a "T" rated story so everyone won't be disgusted.

Any ideas?
 
Lulz, I see what you did there.

Any ideas?
I'm not one to write much fanfiction XD I generally read it and appreciate so ideas are scarce with me. Hmm, you could try to draw inspiration from the new generation maybe. I know most of them are jerks but... XD ViolaxZwei is a hot topic right now. Lots of creative license cause of her amnesia and the ambiguity behind how they met (gee, thanks PS...) That is, if you're trying for a new pairing.

OR. Write a fanfic of Pat falling off a cliff and I swear I'll be your BFF XD
 
I'm not one to write much fanfiction XD I generally read it and appreciate so ideas are scarce with me. Hmm, you could try to draw inspiration from the new generation maybe. I know most of them are jerks but... XD ViolaxZwei is a hot topic right now. Lots of creative license cause of her amnesia and the ambiguity behind how they met (gee, thanks PS...) That is, if you're trying for a new pairing.

OR. Write a fanfic of Pat falling off a cliff and I swear I'll be your BFF XD
Ewww... The new generation. Funny thing is, in October 2010, long before SCV was announced, I started on writing a story about me and Talim (A mother and son type of deal) 16 years after SCIV. I was shocked when I found out that SCV was 17 years after IV. I rarely work on it, one day I'll probably upload it here.

If I wrote a story about people falling off a cliff, this would be my list:

-Viola (Dull as hell)
-Lex (Arrogant punk-ass)
-Xiba (Fat, annoying guy in a skinny body)
-ZWEI (Gay dancer)
-Pyrrha (We all problems, deal w/ dat shit)
-Oprah (Pyrrha, you scary!)
-aPat (Set had boobs, not boots)
 
Back
Top Bottom