TopGun87's creations

TopGun87

[04] Fighter
Some more badass shots of TheSavior or Azura or whatever...



































Btw, i think i noticed that lately i've been getting too carried away by posting too much screenshots of my characters... maybe i should start reducing them from now on. Idk why, deep inside me i feel like i want to share all the cool shots for each of them (especially their CE moves)... it's like i have an OCD or something. lol Maybe i should just post videos for these CE moves instead.
 

VILARCANE

[14] Master
It's an interesting character, as for the screenshots, i think they are too many, you should bring more variety and it should tell a story.
What i try to do is to add some text, sometimes make some kind of short background story explaining the fights, add some (or too many) puns, etc. Pictures should help showcase different aspects / details of your CAS, carpet bombing is never a good thing. Sometimes i post too many pics then i remove some.
The way you presented deadking is better.
If you are particularly proud of one CAS do like you did on previous pages, start with editor pics from some interesting angles, use the facial expression features, hide the weapons when they get in the way, and then add the best ingame pics, max 5 or 6. It's better to come up with a new CAS than spend endless time editing / posting pics of the same. Also, remember to crop editor pics using paint or similar tool.
hope it helps !
 

TopGun87

[04] Fighter
Yeah, i need to get away from this bad behavior i've been doing lately... idk what's getting in my head. Time to post the more necessary screenshots that show the details and try to avoid posting too many of unecessary ones. Like the way i presented TheSavior was too rushed... it's like i had no idea what to do with him. Heck, even DeadKing, i've posted too many screenshots of him too.

Anyway, thanks for the tips. I'll make sure not to make the same mistakes again for my next creations... and even improve them more :)
 

Herr-Krieg

[06] Combatant
It´s quite an understandable problem. I too sometimes think wether I post too many screenshots of the same character. I have kind of made it regular basis for me to have the character shown from three angles and then some poses in case they look good in those poses. I take several pictures, watch how they look like on the computer screen and upload the best looking screenshots. You know, trim down screenshots to avoid posting too many and unnecessary of them.

With the Azura for example the number of pictures showing his finishing move is just too overwhelming and the action could be shown with way less photos. But it´s a good thing that you noticed the problem yourself and now have time to do something about it ;).
 

TopGun87

[04] Fighter
Ok, so next up, back to female. Meet Olga... let's say she's a skilled mercenary hired by the Russian to exterminate their enemies. If you ask what the heck is the eye-patch is for... well, let's say it's a special scouter to identify the enemies' power level if they're over 9000 or not. (watching too much Dragon Ball Z)

LOL just kidding... Ok, it's actually just a special eye-patch like Solid Snake used in MGS4, so it acts as both NVG and thermal goggles.

Now, the question is... what weapon style she's using? ;)



Btw, she's actually not a new character since she's been in my collection for a while... so she doesn't have many details. But i did going for a simple look for her.
 
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TopGun87

[04] Fighter
No one wants to guess what weapon she's using? or maybe the answer is too easy? lol ok then, i'll just get to the point.

Yup, she's using a Raphael style.

Anyway, looking at it again, i think she looks more like a mix of police woman and a soldier than a mercenary. So idk what she actually is... maybe a super soldier or perhaps a triple agents disguised as a soldier. Idk i'm so confused myself. lol






"I'm so sexy and i know it"


"I'm so sexyble (sexy and flexible) and i know it"




Like uncle Ben said "Great power comes with great responsibility"... As for me, i say... "Sexy attire comes with sexy body"










 

Herr-Krieg

[06] Combatant
My my, you have created most stunning and appealing character my friend ;)! She looks pretty and elegant, her colour theme of blue, dark and white ( her hair ) is in neat balance and her style of Raphael really fits her well. Your way of presenting her at the night of the moonlight in appealing and elegant poses is truly a convenient sight to look at, which I could have kind of expect with your skills of presenting your characters. And of course, her more.....revealing screenshots and poses are always a plus XD.

She kind of reminds of my creation Hilda Braum. Maybe they are in some way related? Or each others counterparts on the both sides of the conflict between Germany and Russia? Who knows XD?

Overall most awesome job with her :D. I´m eager to see what you will come up with next ;).
 

TopGun87

[04] Fighter
Thanks for your in-depth review as always HK :)

Yeah, she looks similar to Hilda, but different body types and weapon style. And yeah, perhaps your Hilda and my Olga are meant to be enemies given the history between Germany and Russia... or could just be a rival if you choose them to be so. lol
 

Herr-Krieg

[06] Combatant
You are most welcome my dear friend ;)!

Well it´s your vision of her (Olga) so it´s quite natural and good thing :). I would prefer rivalry relationship, like, both sided respect or something like that XD. Material for a fanfiction story? Hmm, propably not XD.
 

TopGun87

[04] Fighter
Well, i have an idea. How 'bout you ask your artist to draw this fanfiction of the rivalry between Olga and Hilda... and maybe QueenSuccubi and Ravienna too... or even all of our creations? ok nvm, that's just too much. lol
 

Herr-Krieg

[06] Combatant
Hmm, such an interesting bunch of different ideas all sounding most intrigueing :). Definetily something to make a note off considering how awesome they would look like :). I mean, you would give your permission to use your creations in such a comission, right? As to using all of our creations....yeah, a bit too much I would say XD ( and expensive as hell ), but hey, it´s good to have dreams, right ;)?